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Animal Preserve A long distance backpacker wanders onto a wildlife research facility, only to discover that the f 20 Nov 2019 02:56
Rebellion On Mars: Uninvited Guests Continuing the Rebellion on Mars Story Universe, a series of tales about the teen rebellion again 27 Nov 2019 07:25

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Animal Preserve Recovery The helicopter is waiting at the top of the hill, rotors turning. A second guy wearing the same gray BDUs helps get you into the chopper and jabs an IV into your arm. 24 Nov 2019 21:51
Animal Preserve The Cost of Curiosity The high grass is definitely tick territory. Fortunately, you are wearing permethrin - treated clothing. 20 Nov 2019 03:14
Rebellion On Mars: Uninvited Guests Collisions 2063 /251 ucnasa73655 Archibald Conor Bruce MacKinnon. First log entry as Coprates Chasm Science Team Leader. 29 Nov 2019 04:46
Rebellion On Mars: Uninvited Guests Until we meet again Archie and his team arrived in the Imstoshai's transporter three days ago. 

Sols. Not days.
28 Nov 2019 12:26
Rebellion On Mars: Uninvited Guests The Way Home It is so hard to pack up and go — home? Back to Earth, anyhow. 27 Nov 2019 22:36
Rebellion On Mars: Uninvited Guests Tree Talk Time The ceiling of the great lava tube starts to glow, the air warms like an Earthside morning sea breeze, and there are faint whispers of movement up slope. 27 Nov 2019 22:06
Rebellion On Mars: Uninvited Guests Big Steps I can’t let myself think about what I’m doing. I would lose it. 27 Nov 2019 08:51
Rebellion On Mars: Uninvited Guests Little Green Men ♂ ☿ ♀ ♁ ♂ ☿ ♀ ♁ ♂ REBELLION ON MARS ♂ ☿ ♀ ♁ ♂ ☿ ♀ ♁ ♂ 27 Nov 2019 08:10

Comments

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Dr. Moran? No, just ongoing healthcare debates in the USA Do you mean Moran Cerf (https://destinationluxury.com/moran-cerf-science-dreams/)?

 

If so, not really. This is just an Area 51-ish conspiracy story, more or less. Might send the main character into an ethical dilemma about what his saviors require of him in exchange for the maintenance needs of his cyberbody.

 

Not sure yet, somewhat distracted this week by more unbelievable fictions like having to replace a dead washing machine. Life.
06 Dec 2019 02:32
Where this story could go This story began as ruminations while I was out backpacking and thinking about the four threatening species one has to contend with on the Appalachian Trail.  Black bears are biggest, but hardly worth mentioning other than to keep a clean campsite and avoid threatening them. Of the couple of vipers are present, only the timber rattler presents a hazard unless one is careless of where one puts one's hands and one's feet, and it makes its presence known very distinctively. 23 Nov 2019 22:10
If it´s Wichita, wind farms are big http://www.kansasenergy.org/wind_projects.htm

 

Il-Su's cover job could be a real estate buyer who works with the banks to acquire rights on failing farms. This would not be a popular job, as the swarms of wind turbines have been intruding on the dominant rural farm lifestyle. 
20 Nov 2019 10:21
A small technical suggestion -- FBI, not CIA A minor matter -- entirely due to the politics of American bureaucracy, counter intelligence operations within the USA are the responsibility of the FBI. This also extends to overseas intelligence gathering on international organized crime.  The CIA runs intelligence gathering on a broader scale and their communications monitoring activities do extend back inside the country. 20 Nov 2019 10:07
This is exciting! What fascinating features for collaborative writing!  Will the possibility of more than one sequels support following several steps into a story?  

Good selection of text formatting tools, also.

 
18 Nov 2019 17:23